Monday 27 January 2014

Pitch feedback

From our pitch we received feedback from our teacher and peers of things they liked and things that we could improve on.

They liked our idea as it conforms to stereotypes of the rebellious party girl but also the nerdy girl. Also, our choice of costume and how clear the difference was between the two was favoured with our peers. They also liked our name 'Double Trouble' as it is catchy and rhymes so people will remember it.

However, we also received some constructive criticism, such as our target audience and demographic needs to be more clear and concise. Unfortunately we didn't include our story board in our pitch so we need to add our storyboard to our pitch.

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